I like when you messed up you went back and corrected it. I was reminded that Joel and Tony were trouble makers, but Tony is the scared and trouble maker one.
I loved the adjectives you used to explain the book. I also liked how you didn't give the book away but made somebody want to read the book by giving a challenge. I wonder why Tony did all those crazy things. Would you have done anything that Tony did?
I agree on the ratings that you gave this book, and you did great on describing Joel and Tony's traits, and how they act in the book. How do you think Tony would react if Joel was the one who drowned.
I like how you didn't give away the book and you just said the important parts. I also like how you gave reasons about your social issue. Great work!
You really did a great job on not giving away the story! This made me think about how peer pressure can change a lot.
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